Time for bed ~ Zebedee

I just sent in my entry for NYC Midnight. I found it tough again with it being romcom. The story flowed quite easily but I found it difficult to edit it down to 1000 words and still keep the detail it needed, not to mention a bit of comedy. I don’t know why I struggle with this genre so much, I think I just find it all a bit predictable and I’m not good enough at writing it to make it less so. Anyway, it’s posted on the right, it’s called ‘No Cakewalk.’