So unless you’ve been living on the moon for the last few months, you’ll know that National Flash Fiction Day was on Wednesday. To re-cap – this was an event that celebrated flash fiction, i.e. very short stories, usually written quite quickly and generally focussing on a brief moment in time (that’s my definition, but there’s nothing set in stone). There were events online and all over the country (and international events too) – you can read more about it on the website and blog. When I saw the first announcement about it on twitter, I immediately jumped in with both feet.
Once Upon A Time
My first port of call was to contact Anna Meade at Yearning For Wonderland and ask if she’d like to collaborate on a competition. ‘It’s not just for UK writers,’ I begged her… and after her recent success with The Fairy Ring contest, I was keen to run something similar. An open competition where writers post their stories on their own blogs and link them all together. The lovely thing about The Fairy Ring was the way that everyone supported each other, read each other’s entries, and generally caused a Twitter frenzy. After lots of time-zone limited discussions with Anna, we came up with Once Upon A Time (#ouatwriting) and started madly promoting using our alter-egos… she, #fairyqueen and I, #darkfairy. Sometimes these personas switched. The result was a whole sheaf of fabulous prizes, including books, t-shirts and general adoration. We exceeded expectations and received 88 fantastic entries. It was very difficult to choose the winners. I had a rather long shortlist, as did Anna, and guess what? They were almost completely different! After a few painful discussions, we both did another re-read and came up with a much shorter list, and finally, the winners.
Oliver Barton’s ‘Pink Bells‘ was just the perfect, poignant tale. Angela Readman‘s ‘A Mermaid in Texas’ was just so completely raw and stunning, it stuck with me from the very first time I read it. McKenzie Barham‘s ‘I can show you the world’, felt so unbelievable real, it just blew me away. Then there was the gorgeous fan favourite, ‘Three Simple Words’ by Cory Eadson… There were many, many others worthy of a mention too, and I realised I had to do something about this – we couldn’t just celebrate the winners…
So I had the bright idea of putting them all together into an anthology… I wanted to celebrate the competition, but I underestimated the difficulty and time-constraints of putting a book together. It turned into a logistical nightmare, trying to coordinate 88 entries into a book, when each one was formatted according to individual taste on everyone’s own blog… everyone’s editing style was just ever so slightly different: single or double quotes, curly or straight, short or long hyphens, double spaces at the start of sentences, breaks between paragraphs, and my personal favourite – using spaces instead of tabs! Writers, PLEASE don’t so this – it makes editing a complete nightmare 🙂 As for typos, everyone does the now and again – how many times have you read a published book and find them? The odd one isn’t an issue, but if there are a lot, it does look sloppy (Note: this doesn’t apply to any of the entrants!) Then, of course, I had to contact everyone to ask for their permission, to make sure I had their link details for the author info, and to chase up people with missing information… My email decided to cause me a few problems there, but I got in touch with everyone in the end! Anyway, it’s almost done and I’ll be posting details of where you can buy it soon 🙂
Then came my next activity (note: I have not even mentioned writing anything myself yet…) I volunteered my services and was very pleased to be chosen as one of the 7 editors for the FlashFlood Journal (I also chose the name *ahem*). This involved us all taking a stint on the accept/reject and posting schedule. I’m not telling you which day I was on, but it was non-stop until midnight, then actually a fair bit past that, tidying up the inbox etc. It was a crazy experience (especially towards the end when the emails started bouncing back for no apparent reason)… Stories were flying in quicker than I could read them. I managed it by giving each one a quick read, then moving on, then going back to each one again – then a lot of the time, filing it for a third read. Some stories didn’t make it to the third read, and it wasn’t because they were bad. Mostly it was because they just didn’t grab me, even if the writing was beautiful. Others didn’t make it because I just didn’t understand them! That might’ve just been me though… the whole selection process is very subjective and each editor has their own likes and dislikes. FYI – some of my ‘not sure’ stories got 4or 5 reads – it was that difficult.
However, a few stand-out things that led to my third read (and remember this is only my opinion)
- A great title (seriously – if I have to pick from a pile of similar stories, the best title will win)
- A great opening line/paragraph
- A quirky subject that I haven’t already just read in similar forms in 20 other stories
Funnily enough, these three elements are things that I try hard to think about with my own writing. That, and a good ending. It doesn’t have to be definitive, but it has to be satisfying. I like twists too, but they have to work well. I won’t tell anyone what they should or shouldn’t write, but if you use your twist to tell us that ‘and all along the main character was an animal’ then you better write it well or else it leaves me disappointed! Again, just my opinion. My last thought on this (and some, but not all of the other editors agreed) is that don’t write stuff TOO depressing. It doesn’t have to be funny or crazy, that doesn’t always work either unless it’s written well; but after you’ve read a few miserable tales about funerals and cancer and break-ups, you get a bit fed up with them, even if they are beautifully written (before anyone says anything, yes, I am guilty of the odd bit of misery myself, that’s not the point here – we all do it!) I also learnt something else – as tempting as it might be to email the editors when you’ve received a rejection – don’t. They really and truly don’t have time to give feedback, especially on a project like this where the submissions came in over a short period of time and were being set up for posting on a schedule. I think we all tried our best to respond to everyone, but now having been on the other side, I appreciate how frustrating it must be for anyone hoping for feedback.
So – to sum up – being involved in both of these competitions was a great experience and a great insight, and (being a glutton for punishment) I would love to do it again.
Stuff that I wrote
As for my own writing… *Beware – I am blowing my own trumpet here*
- ‘Shed’ was published in the National Flash Fiction Day Anthology, Jawbreakers
- ‘Message’ was published on 1000 Words
- ‘Sweet Sixteen’ was published in the Raging Aardvark Twisted Tales Anthology
- ‘Nightcrawler’ was published in Chris White’s Photocopier Press Pamphlet
- ‘The Rock’ was published on the FlashFlood Journal (note: subject to the editing process, like everyone else!)
- ‘Uncle Charlie’ was written and posted on the Write-in Blog on National Flash Fiction Day
- ‘Beware: Swans’ will be included in the Once Upon A Time Anthology
I also posted a flashpoint that I wrote in a pub 🙂
And now that it’s all over, I’m reverting back to my *To Write* list… which is ever growing (and includes getting back on with ‘the novel’)…
Thanks to everyone who’s been involved in the above, and a big big thanks to King of Flash, Calum Kerr for the excellent work he put in to creating and executing National Flash Fiction Day… someone buy that man a cake!!
10 thoughts on “National Flash Fiction Day: A Debrief”
Whoo-hoo! Great work.
It’s always a strange sensation, when you reach the end of a work tunnel–be sure to give your brain a few days to wander. Genuinely wander–any thought is okay, and no tasks are preferred. Then you’ll be ready when you reach the next tunnel entrance. 🙂
Can’t wait to promote the OUAT anthology.
Good advice, Melanie. It does feel quite odd without all the pressure, but I’m looking forward to my next challenge. I think I need to leave the flash behind for a little while, crack on with the novel, then see where I go next. Thanks for your support of the anthology too – it’ll be out soon, I promise 🙂
Very impressed with you…I shall remember this post when I start to complain about having ‘no time’! Seriously though you (and all those involved) have done an amazing job. Once Upon a Time was my first foray into contests (except FSF) and it was a privilege to be alongside so many great writers, loved reading every single entry and couldn’t imagine having to pick winners!
Thanks Lisa. I also have a full time job… LOL I know lots of you ladies have kids though, I don’t, so I’ve got to amuse myself somehow in the evenings 😉
Holy smokes, woman. Do you sleep?!
Thank you for all your hard work! And I love your pieces. 🙂
I don’t sleep well, Eva – this is a serious problem! When I’m not working, I’m writing or reading – I need to make more time for myself to relax, i.e. exercise and sleep. My busy stint is over now (she says, thinking ‘can I write 3k words of novel every day for a month and finish it’) Thanks for your lovely comment x
Wow!!! I don’t know how you managed to get all the done but HUGE congrats. I was honored to have my Flash chosen for the flood. That was the only thing I managed to get done other than a flash story on my blog (my first foray into fantasy, no comments so guess it should be my last…LOL!). I’ll be watching for next year!
I don’t know either, Donna. Some days I couldn’t speak I was so tired. If I did this for a job, it’d be hard enough! I love it though, I can’t stop… well done for getting into the Flood – we had 100s of entries – it was tough competition! I haven’t seen your fantasy story, I may pop over for a look (fantasy is not really my thing either but with these fairy comps and various blog prompt comps I am finding elements of it creeping in) It can be good to write outside your comfort zone, but it doesn’t always work – sometimes it makes you re-evaluate what you write though! The one area that I really can’t even attempt is romance. I don’t read stuff like that and I definitely can’t write it! Thanks for your lovely comment 🙂
Great blog, Susi! And didn’t you do well with your submissions/acceptances? Excellent.
Thanks Susan 🙂
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