Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week, Lillie McFerrin posts a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. This week’s prompt is DARKNESS.
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I haven’t done this for a very long time, and I love the photo… so here goes:
The Storm
I cower under a rock, sheltering from the dark, swirling storm that threatens to lift me up and shatter me into tiny pieces.
The clouds bloom like poison gases, and I wrap my arms around myself, trying to keep in the warmth; to stop myself from shaking.
I know now what a terrible mistake I’ve made, opening that box.
The shadowy figure of Pandora appears before me – beautiful, yet murderous… and she’s angry.
So very angry.
nice use of prompt
The Darkness
Thank you.
Love it, Susi, dark and brooding!
Thanks Lisa!
Very nicely written:)
Thank you.
Great! Of course as a fan I expected this to be great.
What a lovely thing to say! Thanks, Jean 🙂
Very cool!
Thanks!
I love your prompt… simple, yet have a depth. A story of angry Pandora goddess.
Thanks 🙂
I loved the description in the first two sentences. The image and your words conjure up a pretty scary scene.
Thank you 🙂
Good one…
Thanks!