Review: Pariah – David Jackson

This is the second in my series of reviews of new authors I’ve discovered in 2012. David Jackson was highly commended in the CWA Debut Dagger Competition and  subsequently achieved publication through the Macmillan New Writing Scheme. His first book Pariah, has been re-packaged and re-released under the Pan imprint, and I suggest you read it soon because the second book in the series, The Helper, is released on 1st March.

From the back cover: It’s a bad enough day for NYPD detective Callum Doyle when his cop partner is murdered. But when the dead man’s replacement is also brutally killed, suspicion falls on Doyle himself. Then he receives an anonymous message: anyone he gets close to will die – and that includes his own family.

I’d been holding off on reading this until the new paperback edition came out and I was lucky enough to get hold of it early thanks to winning a competition for a signed copy (Thanks Dave!) My only regret is that I didn’t purchase the old edition so I could read it sooner! I love discovering new authors I’ve been hoping to find one with an intriguing main character that would make me want to get to know (both) of them better. I’m pleased to say that Pariah is just what I’ve been waiting for. It centres around Callum Doyle, an Irish New York cop with none of the usual stereotypes except that he likes Bushmills and Guinness, and we can let him off with that.

The story follows his ostracism from the NYPD, and his friends and family, after he seemingly becomes the epicentre of a series of brutal murders. The plot flies, the descriptions make the city jump out at you and the whole cast of characters come alive (except the dead ones, obviously). I loved the tragic Mickey Spinner, and I especially liked the scene in the pub where everyone is trying to ignore Doyle – Paddy the barman’s dialogue was so spot on I could actually hear him speak:

‘Do I pay you to be standing there looking like an idiot when there’re customers to be served? The man has a thirst on him. Give him a drink. And the rest of you: don’t you have better things to do than stand there gawking at the sight of a man ordering a Guinness? Jesus, they must be sad lives you’re living.’

We’re pulled through the story in the present tense, so we get to experience things at the same time as Doyle does and consequently I read this in two sittings because I really couldn’t put it down. I have to admit I was pretty sure I knew whodunnit from quite early on, but that’s because I was brought up with the Taggart school of murder (‘mur-dur’) suspects 😉 This didn’t spoil it for me though as there were quite a few red herrings and ‘what ifs’ to keep the doubt alive!

I love Detective Doyle and I love David Jackson, and thankfully I don’t have to wait too long for the next instalment, because I’ve already placed my Amazon pre-order for The Helper and it will be with me in a couple of weeks – yippee!

Verdict: Excellent. Read it NOW!

How to Write a Synopsis (Properly)

Last night I submitted an entry to the CWA Debut Dagger Competition. It’s for unpublished crime writers, and requires you to submit 3,000 words of a novel (doesn’t have to be completed – whew!) and a 500-1000 word synopsis of the rest of the story. The entry fee is pretty steep at £25, but with the possibility of Peter James reading your scribblings, it’s well worth it in my opinion. Many writers have progressed from Debut Dagger to fully-fledged crime writers: Belinda BauerDavid Jackson and Ruth Dugdall to name just three.

So, this brings me to my entry… first chapter, not a problem. I wrote it a few weeks ago and spent a good few hours this week editing and polishing until I was happy. Then there’s the synopsis. For some reason, writing a synopsis instils fear and dread into many a writer (maybe even all writers?) and I had convinced myself  it was the synopsis that had let me down in my previous unplaced entries, it couldn’t be anything to do with the first chapter, could it? Hmm…

Write a Great Synopsis – An Expert Guide (#WAGS)

This is where Nicola Morgan comes in, and more specifically, her book ‘Write a Great Synopsis – An Expert Guide‘ , which was released on Friday (which would’ve been far too late to be of any use to me, so I am very grateful to Nicola for sending me a coveted ‘review copy’ a few weeks ago). So what does Nicola know about synopses? A lot actually. She’s published around 90 books (including some Thomas the Tank Engine books, which she cites as some of the most difficult writing she ever did) but you may know her best for her YA novel Mondays are Red or maybe because of her excellent blog: Help! I need a publisher or maybe even because of her writing consultancy: Pen2Publication. I know her from Twitter. How could I not follow someone with this as their avatar?

Note: Use ‘crabbit’ in a sentence: ‘Hod yer wheesht ye crabbit auld bag’ = Please be quiet you grumpy old lady

Anyway, I digress… my review is actually quite short, because there were a few key things to be learned that put me at ease straight away.

The function of the synopsis ‘is to show the decision-makers that you do actually have a book that hangs together… and to show what sort of book it is.’

‘The perfect synopsis does not exist.’

and, most importantly:

‘Your book will not be rejected on the basis of your synopsis.’


After these nuggets, Nicola then goes on to explain in her typically forthright and amusing fashion how to write a synopsis (she suggests two ways to do it) and gives several examples of what to include and why, including case studies from ‘real’ fledglings just like me. I used Method Two, by the way, and I have a feeling that my synopsis wasn’t too bad at all. But to be honest, I’m not that scared about it anymore after reading this book, and the quote from Carole Blake, where she explains that if the writing (of the sample chapter) is so good, she ‘might never get around to reading the synopsis… I might just ring the author and ask for the whole manuscript.’ OH…

You can buy ‘Write a Great Synopsis – An Expert Guide’ here for the ridiculous price of £1 until end of Jan. Make sure you do.

P.S. There is also a competition to win a review of your synopsis by Nicola, here.